Dwelling upon the days we used to talk,
Now nothing.
Shared anything and everything,
Now loneliness.
The giggles and the heart we laughed out,
Lost somewhere.
In search of all happiness,
The moments we spent together,
I find blank space.
I wonder,
Do you miss me?
Do you crave to talk?
And then my heart silently whispers,
Do you even remember me?
My name?
It pierces like a needle,
Pricking inside
Feeling bleeds
Mind numb
Intensifying my pain,
The agony inside me.
This is beautiful! I loved the precision of the content you brought froth through every line. -Cezane
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thank you so much!! ๐
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Beautifully written ๐
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Thank you! ๐
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Wonderfully thought and written ๐ :))
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Thanks Antra! ๐ โค
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Nice๐๐
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Thank you!!! ๐
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Great blog with amazing poetry..๐๐
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I hope to keep impressing you! ๐
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Good luck…๐๐
Happy blogging..
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Wish you the same! ๐
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Your words described heart break in such a touchy manner… :’) the melencholy was almost palpable.. Though I really hope you have overcome it like a brave strong lady.. ๐
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Thank you so much. I am so glad you found it touching and liked it. No worries. I am fine. ๐
Keep smiling. ๐
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You’re welcome shreya.. ๐ ๐ ๐ lovely catching you up here.. ๐ keep writing.
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Same here. โค
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Hi! Shreya, thank-you for stopping by my blog, and taking out time to read and to connect to decaprico. I just went through a few of your posts here, a splendid job I must say. I can relate to this one here, I used to write about the same things good to know, I am not the only one. Stay blessed keep writing, for the love of it.
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Thank you so much for your beautiful words. And It’s my pleasure to read your blogs. I hope to stay in touch with you. ๐ happy blogging! ๐
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Heartbreak is an interesting experience. I’ve had 4 such heartbreaks so far in life (being 50). I quit for awhile, feeling it wasn’t worth the pain, but caring for another is what makes us whole. During a single and no dating life of 5+ years, I learned to really love myself though. Which made the next relationship, my marriage, a completely different type of relationship. I still don’t know if I have it right. I believe in life we are always searching for a love as great as the love we’ve experienced with God. And therefore it is always lacking. We can only do our best to help another be more, and in the process become more ourselves.
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Heartbreak hurts but eventually helps us learn valuable things of our life. You are right. Thanks for stopping by. ๐
Wish you a happy life! ๐
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Sometimes we have to accept that everything we shared with someone is true but at times life pushes and trashes us to the places where one person has no other choice to leave their loved one with enormous amount of love in there heart.
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Yes, exactly.
Sometimes, we have to accept the things the way they are going.
Thanks for stopping by.
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Always a pleasure going through piece of work..Happy weekend ..:)
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Wish you the same. ๐
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You two probably need to have a talk. ๐
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Sometimes, what naturally happens is good for us. Though, we are hurt a lot but we have to accept it.
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It’s all about what can give the most benefit to the situation, and only you can say that. Some situations require more communication and some need acceptance. You know your own heart. ๐
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Yes! ๐ I know what I am doing is is for my betterment.
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Then all is well in Shreya World. ๐
Sincerely, you have my very best wishes that it works out for all parties concerned.
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Thank you very much for your kind concern. ๐
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You’re very welcome Shreya. ๐
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I too feel a lot of things are result of communication gap and Acceptance after that.
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You are right. Sometimes we people accept that it has to be this way. And when communication gap goes for a long time, it ends everything.
But it depends on both the parties, what they want.
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Thanks Busby – are you the person Shreya is writing this poem about? ๐
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Shouldn’t be the case. Because I am proficient in communication ๐
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Good to hear. ๐
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Having a nightmare with names today! ๐
Of course, you are called Bhanu not Busby! ๐
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No he is not the person. ๐ and if in the case he were, I don’t think he would be commenting here. ๐
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Hence what I said about communication!! ๐
He should’ve been the first person to read it and the first to comment. ๐
I’m sorry – I’m sticking my nose in where it isn’t supposed to be. ๐ฆ
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Shared this post on- https://ayush2015blog.wordpress.com/2016/04/10/looking-back/
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I have been trying to write the same thing since a week….I had so many thoughts that I just couldn’t write what I had in my heart….. You wrote what I wanted to….it’s amazing….
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Thank you so much.
I would just say, write out whatever you feel. Dont think much and NOT be afraid of peoples’ criticism.
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This is so touchy Shreya. ๐
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Hmm! Thank you Sumit! ๐ โค
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Keep sharing such posts.
This is so matching with my situation ๐ฆ
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Ya sure.
Now a days, I see most of us suffering the same. ๐
Anyway, keep smiling.
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Haha.. Yes yes.
Keep smiling you too Shreya.
Have a great Sunday ๐
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Same time.. Same thoughts.. Interesting to know.. And it is a very wonderful read.. ๐
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Yeah! That’s what I just thought. Coincidence.
Thank you so much.
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Serendipity.. ๐
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Oh yes! โค
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I think there is at least one person who is thinking exactly the same way about something like Love, Environment, Science, Technology and so on. So that’s fine. There can be many more.
Interesting is that you guys write about passiveness –
Does that mean there is communication Gap ?
Why is that both the parties are not on same page ?
Is it because of distance coming into picture ?
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Right about people thinking same thing at same time.. But it is just rare to meet them, unless some thing like this happens..
To me, the distance is in between the hearts and communication is not the problem..
For it evolves over a period of time and this is not a project to have a review on how things are at regular intervals..
Living in the present and going with the flow makes the present easy, but naming it is tough..
Though it is easier to understand them in hindsight..
As for not being on the same page, two humans with free will does have their own thinking influenced by so many factors.. So it is just a tangent and a rarity to be on the same page for a longer while..
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Isn’t the purpose of Love to be on same page or to be together ?
Why does so much of pain is associated with Love ?
So much of Longing ? The pinching pain and agony ? Is that all worth it ? Is it a price worth paying ? Is it even Love or Confusion ?
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Love is not painful in itself. It scatters to different page and causes all the pain and agony only when they try to satisfy every other person in their individual life apart from the one.
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In the course of journey if this happens that’s fine. The pain that accompanies when everyone is involved is rightly pointed out. But after certain time, everything should make sense. If it doesn’t make sense I am not sure of why such things happen.
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All the confusions blurted and whined in the social medias and elsewhere is happening during that ‘certain time,’ till everything settles into place..
And certain things makes sense only in hindsight and not in realtime..
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Hands fold
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He! – http://wp.me/s4cX5E-he
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This is amazing!
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Pls tell her…
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There is some discussion going on this He post, you may please read and share you thoughts accordingly.
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OK sure, I’ll go through it.
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Thanks for the referring.. ๐
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Both talking about same things so ๐
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Right.. ๐
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