She had an immense love that consisted of lust too. In second line, I said she gave him her heart as well as her soul. But where there is lust only, the person just give his/her body? Right?
That is what made your poem so thought-provoking and profound! Lust might start the fire, but it is ultimately just taking. She was willing to give everything!
Loved post.
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Thank you โค๏ธ
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I always thought there is something divine hidden in love making which only few experience.
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True that.
Thanks. โบ
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But i believe it is almost impossible for ordinary humans like us ๐
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I meant to experience that divinity,maybe heart and soul have to be pure.Leave it,i take simple things to complicated levels ๐
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Interesting.
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Thank you! โบ
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You’re welcome and keep it up ๐
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Beautifully written Shreya, that’s what happens today! ๐
You expressed it perfectly! โ
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Thank you so much, Chandni! Nice to know you agree and understand the verity of my words.
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Yes Judy! That’s what I wanted to express through my poem. Thank you so much for your feedback. โบโค
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Interesting – the first line about her feeling like a wild animal means she had lust, too! Perhaps that clouded her judgement?
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She had an immense love that consisted of lust too. In second line, I said she gave him her heart as well as her soul. But where there is lust only, the person just give his/her body? Right?
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That is what made your poem so thought-provoking and profound! Lust might start the fire, but it is ultimately just taking. She was willing to give everything!
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Yes Judy! That’s what I wanted to express through my poem. Thank you so much for your feedback. โบโค
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This really happens nowadays.Well written ๐
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Thank you, Pratishtha! โบ
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nice shreya…
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Wow beautifully written, loved the word choice ๐
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Thank you, Shri! Your appreciation means a lot to me. โบ
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My pleasure ๐ โค
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This is real ๐
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Yea, happens in some cases!
Thank you for stopping by.
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You’re welcome.
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nice post.
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Thank you Sagrika. โคโบ
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Relatable๐
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Yes, SumitOfficial ๐๐
Thank you for your feedback.
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Aai badi Formal thank you bolne wali๐๐๐๐
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Huhhhh!!
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Hehe ๐ ๐
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