A wild animal echoed through her veins,
As she stretched herself wholly to him, her heart and soul.
Unfortunately, on the other side, it was only lust.
Her Love And His Lust.
The scars of my soul bleed through words in the form of poetry.
Mysterious Soul 
Loved post.
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Thank you ❤️
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I always thought there is something divine hidden in love making which only few experience.
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True that.
Thanks. ☺
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But i believe it is almost impossible for ordinary humans like us 🙂
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I meant to experience that divinity,maybe heart and soul have to be pure.Leave it,i take simple things to complicated levels 😛
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Interesting.
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Thank you! ☺
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You’re welcome and keep it up 🙂
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☺
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Beautifully written Shreya, that’s what happens today! 😑
You expressed it perfectly! ✌
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Thank you so much, Chandni! Nice to know you agree and understand the verity of my words.
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My pleasure! ☺☺☺
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☺❤
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Yes Judy! That’s what I wanted to express through my poem. Thank you so much for your feedback. ☺❤
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Interesting – the first line about her feeling like a wild animal means she had lust, too! Perhaps that clouded her judgement?
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She had an immense love that consisted of lust too. In second line, I said she gave him her heart as well as her soul. But where there is lust only, the person just give his/her body? Right?
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That is what made your poem so thought-provoking and profound! Lust might start the fire, but it is ultimately just taking. She was willing to give everything!
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Yes Judy! That’s what I wanted to express through my poem. Thank you so much for your feedback. ☺❤
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This really happens nowadays.Well written 😊
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Thank you, Pratishtha! ☺
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nice shreya…
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Thank you, Akhila ☺
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Wow beautifully written, loved the word choice 🙂
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Thank you, Shri! Your appreciation means a lot to me. ☺
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My pleasure 🙂 ❤
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This is real 🙂
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Yea, happens in some cases!
Thank you for stopping by.
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You’re welcome.
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nice post.
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Thank you Sagrika. ❤☺
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Relatable😊
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Yes, SumitOfficial 😊😉
Thank you for your feedback.
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Aai badi Formal thank you bolne wali😂😂😂😂
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Huhhhh!!
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Hehe 😅😅
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