A wild animal echoed through her veins,
As she stretched herself wholly to him, her heart and soul.
Unfortunately, on the other side, it was only lust.
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Hi! This is Shreya Sharma from India. I'm a lively dreamer who loves to put her efforts to achieve her goals. Happiness is the foremost priority to me and WordPress is a blogging platform that gave my life a new meaning of happiness. Being a voracious reader, I love to read books and write. Writing is a passion and I can't resist myself put words to my thoughts and ramblings. I hope you like my work. Feel free to share the feedback. You are most welcomed. Much love!
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I always thought there is something divine hidden in love making which only few experience.
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True that.
Thanks. ☺
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But i believe it is almost impossible for ordinary humans like us 🙂
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I meant to experience that divinity,maybe heart and soul have to be pure.Leave it,i take simple things to complicated levels 😛
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Interesting.
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Thank you! ☺
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You’re welcome and keep it up 🙂
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Beautifully written Shreya, that’s what happens today! 😑
You expressed it perfectly! ✌
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Thank you so much, Chandni! Nice to know you agree and understand the verity of my words.
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My pleasure! ☺☺☺
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☺❤
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Yes Judy! That’s what I wanted to express through my poem. Thank you so much for your feedback. ☺❤
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Interesting – the first line about her feeling like a wild animal means she had lust, too! Perhaps that clouded her judgement?
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She had an immense love that consisted of lust too. In second line, I said she gave him her heart as well as her soul. But where there is lust only, the person just give his/her body? Right?
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That is what made your poem so thought-provoking and profound! Lust might start the fire, but it is ultimately just taking. She was willing to give everything!
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Yes Judy! That’s what I wanted to express through my poem. Thank you so much for your feedback. ☺❤
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This really happens nowadays.Well written 😊
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Thank you, Pratishtha! ☺
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nice shreya…
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Thank you, Akhila ☺
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Wow beautifully written, loved the word choice 🙂
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Thank you, Shri! Your appreciation means a lot to me. ☺
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My pleasure 🙂 ❤
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This is real 🙂
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Yea, happens in some cases!
Thank you for stopping by.
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You’re welcome.
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nice post.
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Thank you Sagrika. ❤☺
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Relatable😊
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Yes, SumitOfficial 😊😉
Thank you for your feedback.
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Aai badi Formal thank you bolne wali😂😂😂😂
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Huhhhh!!
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Hehe 😅😅
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