Interminable roads take me somewhere.
Diverging me towards a path; Unsearched, unknown.
A point where
the destiny fails,
the world ends,
to an elusive firmament.
I move and move along the flow.
Seeking an urge to uncover mysteries;
Unexplored, unknown.
I step up high,
A place where
the angels appear,
the satan die,
in the immeasurable heaven.
Reached aloft in a furtive world.
I wonder, if this is an artifice or reality;
Undiscovered, unknown.
I feel like a bird
discharged from the servitude,
taking flight in the air,
released from an aviary.
-Shreya
This is indeed a light and abstract piece, leaving no less then wonder in its wake. Thank you for sharing!
I also nominated you for the Sunshine Blogger Award. Further details at https://ninchronicles.wordpress.com/2020/08/21/sunshine-blogger-award/
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Hi thank you so much for reading. π§‘
Also thanks for the award. Happy blogging. π
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This is awesome. The mysterious image and your beautiful writing
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Thank you so much, Jude.
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My pleasure πΌ
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This is a beautiful piece. Mystifying and enticing. Beautiful π§‘
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Thank you very much. It means a lot to me. π
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My absolute pleasure S! Have a fantastic day.
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Beautifully written, Shreya
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Thanks, Shweta. I am so glad you liked it. β£
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This is lovely. ππ
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Thank you so much. π§‘
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Excellent.
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Thank you so much
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I love it!!
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Thanks! π
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You’re so welcome my dear.
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Such a cute and talented bird you are πππ
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Being called a bird!! I was called bird in my school days, reminded of it. π
Though its’ slightly changed now, being called angrybird nowadays. π
And thank you so much, Rohitβ€οΈππ
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You’re welcome, Shreya β€π
But why Angrybird?
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I’m short-tempered. π
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Oh acha βΊ
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“Angels” or Angles?
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Oops. How can I commit this silly error. Thank you so much for pointing it out . ππ
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It’s easy. I do that stuff too! π
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Hehe!
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don’t worry, I make lots of mistakes too!
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Simply lovely Shreya. Feeling like a bird is freeing.
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Thank you! Yes, I penned it down taking a bird in my mind. π
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Unknown roads often took us to beautiful destinations…
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True that. Unexpected journeys give us the most beautiful memories.
Thank you so much! πβ€οΈ
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beautiful lines….with such a breath taking picture …………..lovely dear
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Thank you so much Anagha!!!! You’re so kind. β€βΊ
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I am simply in love with your writing love
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same here Anagha. Your writings are magical. β€
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Such a refreshing piece of writing! love it. xx
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Thank you so much!! πβΊ
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lost in another world…wow!!
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I’m glad you related to my poem. Thanks a lot. βΊ
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No!! M glad u wrote this…
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Thanks!!!
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Shreya, such wonderful writing. descriptive! I LOVED the last line. that was Great!!
And thank you, so much for the follow on my art website too, that was lovely -especially so, since you were number 1000 today! π cheers, and have a marvellous day, Debi
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Thank you, Debi. I am glad you liked my poetry. Waking to such beautiful comment is just amazing. βΊβΊ
Congratulations for completing 1000!! You are doing great.
Happy Blogging. β€βΊ
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Beautifully picturised as well as the words complete it!! Awesome!!βΊπ
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Thank you so much. βΊβΊβ€
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Beautiful. I love all your posts. Hope to read more in future π
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Thank you so much!βΊβ€I’m glad you liked my post. π
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Aww….ππππππ
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One and only insane comment I have got on this poetry π
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Hahahahahhahaa…. me to uss road ke baare me heee sochraππ
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Tu sahi me pagal h πππ
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Tujse kam na par. β€βΊπ
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Han π
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legend..wait for it..legendary.. Shreya. I just hope on this auspicious day of independence, you would be the first to be independent from evil dark world
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I hope.
Thanks Kishan.
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once one sharma said, never say bad words to enemy and thank you to friend.
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Ohhh!! You forgot to tell kishan, “once a *wise* sharma said, …. ” π
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a wise sharma always point out mistake by fool Thakar..huh..
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Hahah! π
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Chandni hamesha itna achha comment kar deti hai ki koi chace hi bachta aur taarif karne ka π
It’s amazingly superb and yeah .. it does transport us to some another place π
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Maheshhh! Aap humesha itne excited kyo rehte comments karne ko? ππ
*Chance* ki spelling dekho! πΉπΉ
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array yaar ….. kuchh nahi hone wala mera ππππ
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Shaanti se type karna seekho, koi jaldi nai. πππ
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Haan , yaad rakhunga ππ
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Esa kbi ho hi ni skta π
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Hehe Yea Chandni appreciates beautifully. But so do you. βΊ No comparisons!!
Thanks Mahesh for your wonderful comment. βΊπ
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Wow! Such a beautiful post, Shreya. Experiencing a new world with complete bliss there. Very magical words. The birds are set free at the end, making me happy.
Happy Independence day. Jai Hind. π
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Wowww!! You know the best thing about your writing? Your words are so powerful, so magical, they transport us to some another place.
Aisa lagta jaise koi movie chal rahi! I love the picture too. ππ
I loved the last lines the most. This is soo full of positivity. Perfect post for today. πβ€π
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Wow, Chandni!! Your comment. It always boosts my confidence to write more and more. I loved it that you feel like a movie running in my poem. ππ I’m glad that my poem take you to another world.
Even I loved last lines the most. You know, I wrote it thinking of a bird’s happiness when released from a cage. βΊ
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Wow, Shreyaa!! You comment always makes me happy πΉπΉ
Aur likho na, and that collab! Vo kab aa raha? π
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It’ll be posted within few days baby. βΊπ
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Ahaaan! πππ
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I loved it baby !! You have it in your blood π Keep writing ! π
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Thank you sweetheart. π I’ll always keep writing. Loved your beautiful comment. β€βΊ
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