Your kiss was so real in my dream
it felt raw and nicotine
a bit of honey and a bit of smoke
altogether
as a perfect blend of milk and caffeine
yet it remained unfinished
you know like
half sunset view
half-moon night
undone.
and maybe
uneaten pizza slices
or refused macaroons.
-SHREYA
I love the sentiments felt you wove Shreya!π
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Thank you so much, Cindy. π
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Always! π
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Alas, dreamy π
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Ah thanks π
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Such a pleasure.
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It’s so beautiful! βΊοΈI really like your poem! π
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Thanks, Sophia! πΊπ
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My completely pleasure ππΊ
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Awww this ones a sweet one πβ£οΈ
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Thank you πΌπΌ
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You’re welcome π€πΈ
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Love this.
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David
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Thank you so much, David!
It’s more of a wordplay than a poem I guess π
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Simple, yet complex and elegant. A visceral experience youβve create here, Shreya. Wonderful. π
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You got it, Jeff. Thank you so much for putting these words of appreciation. β€
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You’re welcome, Shreya. Always a pleasure and treat to read you. π
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Thatβs an excellent poem Shreya ππ€πΉ
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Thank you so much! Glad you know. πΊ
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I loved this one dear Sharma. Those sweet kisses, we can never forget. I enjoyed your work today and you are a amazing writer.
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Thank you so much, John. I am so glad you read my work and liked it. πβ£
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You are welcome dear Shreya.
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Haha.. Nice one dear.. Very well written ππ
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Thanks, Shabnam. Beautiful name. π
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Thank youβ€π
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Lovely!!!!ππ
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Thanks, dear. π§‘
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Beautifully written β€οΈ
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Thanks, Shweta. π
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Brilliantly penned, Shreyaπ
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Thanks, Nathi. πΌ
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Youβre welcome! And how have you been, Shreya?
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I am good. Hope you are good too. π
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Yes I am! And have a wonderful day!!
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