My sister leaves my place
with a whiff of subtle memories.
Her spatial countenance, like face of a new bud,
blooming petals and uncut diamonds.
My savior in dark alleys and haunted houses,
Lone deserts and amazon forests.
Sister, save me today
for you share my blood.
I can’t move. My heart denies to beat. My limbs refuse to shift.
This body is now a sea of gothic waves.
Zillions of parallel waves colliding in this vaporized structure of bones and flesh.
A living ache yearns to hail inside my empty belly,
never decaying.
Shield me,
Protect me!
I am this voluptuous anger today.
I am the endless storm,
birthing a vast sea of gothic waves,
and the tides not under the control of moon.
A cyclone of three-dimensional anxiety encircles my heart.
-SHREYA SHARMA
A very raw and organic verse. Pulling at the heartstrings ..
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Glad that you liked it. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. ๐
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You are very gifted, Shreya. Am happy and honoured to be able to read and comment on work such as yours.
Take care.
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How do I express my gratitude to a beautiful writer like you. Thanks a lot again, dear. ๐๐บโค
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Great post!!
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Thanks โค
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Tnx
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Shreya, very moving yet powerful at the same time! โค๏ธ
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Ah it is! Thank you so much. โค
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My pleasure. ๐
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This is brilliant โฃ
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Thanks, Daphny! ๐
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Most welcome โฃ
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Very powerful! โค๏ธ
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Thanks, Hemalatha!
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Powerful vent of emotions Shreya. Well composed โค๏ธ
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Thanks, Radhika. Means a lot. ๐
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Beautifully penned, Shreya!
Really loved it๐
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Thanks, Deeksha! ๐๐
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Same to me
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Dramatic emotions brilliantly described. ๐ Beautiful poem, Shreya.
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Thank you so much, Michele. ๐๐
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You are most welcome. ๐
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Wow!!! So beautifully written!!
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Thanks a lot! ๐
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You’re welcome ๐
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Such a powerful and profound piece, Shreya. Beautifully written.โค๏ธ
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Thank you so much, Grace! I am elated. ๐๐ผ
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Truly my pleasure.๐
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Wonderful… I can see it almost as a call to arms against those waves.
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Ah you got it right! Thanks a lot for the observation and comment. โค
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Definitely an amazing blog ๐
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Thank you for reviewing!
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Beautiful Shreya
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Thank you.
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Beautiful Shreya
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Thanks ๐
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Most welcome Shreya..๐๐ป
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Wonderful poem! Deep insight ! ๐๐ค
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Thank you! ๐
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So deep…
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Thanks for reading!
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Powerfully written!
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Thank you for reading. ๐
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Welcome!
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‘voluptuous anger’ yessss!!
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Yea
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