And again, he came back
Touched the quiscent bruises of her heart
Cosseted her with his ocean of love
Quenched her desires
And succeeded to make her fall in his trap of treacherous love.
Again!
The scars of my soul bleed through words in the form of poetry.
And again, he came back
Touched the quiscent bruises of her heart
Cosseted her with his ocean of love
Quenched her desires
And succeeded to make her fall in his trap of treacherous love.
Again!
Well written! Would love some feedback on my newest piece ‘look at me now’ 😊 https://malisehoney.wordpress.com/2017/05/04/look-at-me-now/
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Powerful words. I love how you knit them together.
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Thank you so much! 😊😇
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Beautiful!
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Thank you, Alexa ❤️
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This is so soft and sweet! U have a very unique thing about you!! Maybe you can check out my blog and I’ll do the same and we can exchange likes and a follow
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Aww! Thank you so much for your kind words of appreciation. 😊❤️
I’ll visit your blog surely.
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Six short lines and you already have a beautiful piece! It’s amazing what words can do 🙂 I also share my short stories on my blog https://katiemdeanblog.wordpress.com/
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Thank you so much! ☺☺ I’m glad you liked it.
I’ll surely visit your blog. 💖
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Love reading/writing a good short story. This was nice to read. 🙂
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Thank you. Glad to know. Will write more short stories. 😊
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Lovely post
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Thank you.😍☺
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Lagta hai tum sab ladkon ko trap karne wala aadmi samach rakha hai 😛
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Not yet.
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Can i ask you something?if a guy loves a girl so much but couldn’t marry her is he a cheater?
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Shreya if i misread your poem,i am sorry.Maybe you meant love is seducingly magical.
I only said it as a joke 🙂
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Wonderfully expressed Shreya ! 😊
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Thank you so much, Tina! ☺☺❤
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❤️😊
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Short story 6 is there or done? I read all the previous 4 though… 😱😱🤔🤔
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That’s a great favour from you. 😍 Thank you so much for going through then in one read.
I’ll post 6 asap. 😍☺☺
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Chilling
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Thanks.
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Beautifully written Shreya. 😃
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Written nicely. Treacherous Love..hmm
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Thank you 🙂
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Welcome..
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Thank you for following Storyteller. — Ray
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My pleasure. 🙂
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Shreya, again you are making my poor heart think about “He”. I Wish he would also come back, say sorry and Be Beside me.
Love You Babe.
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Cattie!! If he is trust worthy and deserves you, I wish he comes. ☺☺ Because I know girl, you deserve the best. 😍
Love you too ❤
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I just want him to be My Best Friend. Nothing More and Nothing Less.
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Then I wish it comes true. 🙂
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And the Love Saga continues.
I suggest you make a collection of all your thoughts, for this ain’t coming back again.
However if you can continue to feel so for long enough and continue to write with the same rigor n zeal, then sure be of the times, when the world will be craving to get your autograph !
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First of all Bhanu, I’m really glad to read your comment after such a long time. it has been always interesting to get your feedback.
And the words you just said!! I just pinched myself to believe it. I really have no words to thank you for such high words of appreciation. I am honored. It feels so happy to know that I’m able to write so well that my readers and blogger friends are finding it worth-reading. And of course, writing is food to me and I’ll b writing with the same vigor and zeal. I don’t know if world will crave for my autograph or not, but yes i’m happy to get such heart warming response. 🙂 ❤
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‘don’t answer,, it’s a trap.’ wow..he is the first guy who trapped a girl..you go guy
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hawwww!! kishan, you are being so mean to girls out there. 😛 If a girl trapped you, doesn’t mean that every girl traps a guy. 😛 😀
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“it’s a trap Kishan.. Don’t answer this”😝😝 Jokes aside ..your observation about me hating girls is totally wrong..infact believe me, I was the first person ..who gave ‘FIRST WOMAN OF THE WORLD’ award to Eve..and she pouted and we’ve beautiful selfie with ugly Adam
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Kishan!!!! Kuch bhi!!!!!!
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that’s I am
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That’s what I like about you, Kishan. 😉 ❤
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I loved 3rd, 4th, 5th and 6th letter in the reply.. am I in love😎😓
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Oh God!! 😛 ❤ Kishan, don't forget, I'm wicked too. 😛
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Very nice!
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Thank you. I’m glad you liked it. 🙂
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Awesome Post Shreya ji.
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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Always Ur Welcome Shreya ji.
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Totally worth the read 😍 loved it http://www.misskymmiee.com
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Thank you so much, Miss kymmiee!! I’m glad you loved it. ❤ 🙂
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Perfectly written.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Great.
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Thank you! 🙂
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