Rain your love on me
And canoodle softly with my skin and color,
The way silver moonlight spreads on the colossal earth in the dark.
Whisper the untold stories in my awaiting ears
And clear me from all the curiosities,
Take me into your secret world of love and verity,
So that I’m very far away from this insipid world of fallacy.
Loved this poem! π
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Thank you so much, Shweta. I’m glad you loved it.
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Beautiful. I love the picture.
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Thank you so much. ππ
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You’re welcome.
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Beautiful
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Thank you! βΊβ€
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This is such a beautiful piece of poetry, Shreya! Amazing play of expressions. It really took me to a journey full of love and purity π
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Thank you so much, Prateek. Your comments are so wonderful and making my day. βΊβ€
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I feel honoured ma’am π
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this is as poetic and romantic one can get. π
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Thank you, Nitin. βΊβ€
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Wonderful poem shreya,loved it..:)
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Thank you so much β€βΊ
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Impressive and interesting. I enjoyed reading it.
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Thank you!! I’m glad you liked it. βΊ
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Wow! Beautiful π it’s a pleasure reading your writings
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Thank you so much!! βΊβ€
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Aww! You know what, I have no words! β€π
I love these words of yours, you’re like a dictionary actually! Thanks, vocabulary improve hua mera! ππ
Veryy deeeeep thoughts, extremely beautiful! βΊβΊβΊπ
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Thank you Thank you Thank you so much, Chandni!!!!!!! I am so happy to listen these beautiful and kind words of appreciation. β€βΊ Your comments just make my day. β€βΊπ
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Aww!! And your Expensive words build my language! Thanks to you. πβΊβΊβ€
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My pleasure. β€βΊ
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So that Iβm very far away from this insipid world of fallacy…
the ultimate intention.. beautiful Shreya..
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Thank you so much, Akhila. βΊβ€ I am so happy you understood my ultimate intention. π
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I loved it Shreyu, it feels like deja vuππππ
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Thank you! βΊ
Oh you feel like deja vu π
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Oh sorry, you already showed me this one. π
I’m stupid. π β€
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Idiot!! ππβ€
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Amazing poem β€
Learned few words π
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Thank you so much!!!! βΊβΊβ€
Am glad that you learned something new from my poem. βΊ
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So beautifully written. I had to look up the word ‘insipid’. Thanks for teaching me a new word along the way.π
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Thank you so much!! βΊβ€ I’m so glad you liked it.
Well, it feela good to share and thus, increasing our knowledge. βΊπ
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