In the dazzling night
While she stands in the balcony
The dripping drops of rain
adding exuberance to the moments
Her favorite song tranquilizing her soul.
And suddenly
She looks up in the sky cravingly,
searching for the stars in the rain
As worthless as
She looks for her moon in the vacuum of her life.
-Shreya
Drinking in your words with such parched eyes brings much refreshment to my weary self. Thank you!
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Aww!!! I don’t have words to thank you James. I have just woke up and reading to your words has made my day. Thank you so much. ☺❤
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Very beautifully written
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Thank you so much❤☺
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This is so beautiful Shreya.
There’s something about your words,they always make me smile.😊
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Thank you so much, Pratishtha!!!! Your comment made my day! 😍❤☺ I wish to make you smile more by my post!!! 😍☺
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😊😊😊
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This is so amazing! *_* it touched my heart straight through! Keep writing! And don’t forget to smile!
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Aww!! Thank you so much!!! ☺😍❤
And your beautiful comment touched my heart. ☺
You too keep smiling. ☺
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let her find her moon in the vaccuum of her life
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Yea Akhila 😍
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Let the rains cease, and the bright moon will shine up in the sky, and soon in your life too! Yayy! 🙌❤
Beautifully written, Shreya! 😍
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Yay!!! You gave it an interesting touch. 😍❤ I always love your positive approach Chandni. I am a pessimist. You can infer it from my posts.
Thank you for your beautiful feedback. 😍❤☺
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Hehhe, I’m a pessimist too! 😑
Yes, notice kiya hai maine, you are so good with words, it’s hard to understand the hidden meaning behind your beautiful words, that hidden pain! 😔
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Hmm, thanks for reading my post so attentively. 😍☺
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Next time se I’ll pay more attention to the meanings! 😉😊😊
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Lovely ❤
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Thank you, Mahesh! ❤ I wrote it at night when it was raining cats and dogs. 😍
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Rain is great source for new writing ideas 😂😂
btw, you always rocks at poetry .. ❤
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Yea!! Rains induce good ideas! ❤
Thank you again ☺☺😍
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masterpiece by Shreya
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Aww! Thank you, Kishan! ☺😍
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